There is a steam train. A lot of people are waiting. Beside the station there is a big garden. Most of the trees are green. The station is colourful.

3 thoughts on “5 sentence challenge by Rajsri

  1. Hi Rajsri. This is a good piece of writing that really describes what you first see when you look at the picture. Sort and snappy sentences work really well because as you read it it has the rhythms of a train chugging along, well done.


  2. You did this very quickly Rajsri and you have started the sentences in different ways- well done! Next time could you take a little longer and perhaps think how you could make your sentences longer .


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