I would like to go to the moon.I will were a space hellmut .I found 999 eleeunss .I see all around space.I see lots of things in space

3 thoughts on “Molly 5SC

  1. Well done for putting in your capital letters and full stops, Molly. Next time, remember to press the space bar after you type a full stop. I wonder what those aliens looked like? I’d like to know!

    Well done!
    Gill Ower
    Marbella, Spain

    Like

  2. Hi Molly,
    I like how you have used your capital letters and full stops in your sentences. I think you could make your writing even better if you could start at least 1 of your sentences in a different way. You could use a time connective like ‘next’ or ‘then’.
    Keep up the fantastic sentence writing.

    Like

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

w

Connecting to %s