The   man  is   bord    because  he   nees      to   go  to  the    parte   .         The   Farmer  has  a   pig  in a  burscit .   The    boy  is  staiering   at  the   vet   man.    THE   vet  man    saying    your  turn  and   he  poned   at my.      THE  LADEES    WHere   chaterring

2 thoughts on “5SC Jaylen

  1. Hello Jaylen

    You have chosen some super verbs which make your sentences more interesting – ‘staring’ instead of looking, and ‘chattering’ instead of talking.

    Keep on with your writing!

    Miss Gill (Team 5SC)
    Costa del Sol, Spain


  2. Well done Jaylen, you typed this up quickly and used ‘because’ to join two sentences. You remembered capital letters and full stops. I wonder if you could check some of your spelling next time?


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