The Girl is bord because the laddies are torking  to the vet.the big brown  dog is tired .  The vet has a pet pig.I am tired said the Girl?  There are lots of piches?

2 thoughts on “5SC Molly

  1. Hola Molly

    I liked how you included some speech in your writing this week, and you used some adjectives, too. Well done and keep on writing.

    Miss Gill (Team 5SC)
    Costa del Sol, Spain


  2. Super writing Molly, you used ‘because’ and added speech to your writing! Don’t forget your capital letters and full stops. Next time read it back carefully when you have finished typing.


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