The fireworks is very gint. The  FireworK is maud of   Gun Pedor. The firework woz kool. The  fireworkis goz to theskau. The fireworks is laud.

2 thoughts on “Abdullah – the firework display

  1. Well done Abdullah. You described the fireworks carefully and I am impressed that you know what fireworks are made of.
    From Mrs McMeekan (Team 5SC)


  2. You read back your sentences and added the full stops which I am really pleased with. Your English is getting better and better and you remembered that fireworks have a little gun powder in them! We should say ‘Fireworks are giant or loud” rather than is because there is more than one firework. Super sentences though Abdullah


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