The fireworks are fast. The fiuwrwks tuts the sun. Red and grenade and yello. They look in
the sky like flaws. They look butaful.

5 thoughts on “Jaden – the firework display

  1. Some great describing Jaden. Well done. I especially like your sentence describing how high the fireworks can go.
    From Mrs McMeekan (Team 5SC)


  2. I love the sentence ‘they look like flowers in the sky’. What a lovely description. And they do go so high that they may touch the sun! Well done for remembering capital letters and full stops.


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