Fireworks are butafull and when fireworks go upp in the night sky the fireworks make a loud sound. This is one bang! They are  sparkly and shiny in the sky. We have firework night and there are lots of diffant fireworks. Stand back when somebody is exploding a firework. There are lots of colers like these pink blu green yello red. Would you stand right next to who is holding a sparkler?

2 thoughts on “Molly The firework display

  1. Molly, you just didn’t stop writing today! You did more than 5 sentences, and used the correct punctuation and have started your sentences in different ways. I am really pleased with your hard work! Maybe you could have a go at the 100 word challenge soon!


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