The men ar selling Josboxs . The man haz kart and he is sellign mango. The man sell dagos for decorashn . The man is selling vegetables. I can hear cars bepign .

2 thoughts on “Gethin – the market in Nepal

  1. Hi Gethin, thank you for telling me about the market in Nepal. I found your sentences very interesting. I like that you included the food and the sound of the car beeping. I was also happy to see an explanation of what the daggers were for. Perhaps some words to describe the colours of the market next time.

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  2. You have tried very hard again Gethin! All the full stops and capitals are correct and you made one sentence a bit longer! Did you any mangoes, vegetables or daggers? I wonder if you can write even more longer sentences next time?

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