I can smell  the eggs   boiling on a pan and In The  coffee shop I had cack with my  mum and dad.     The   unons are   deelisus.  They sell ribs and backcon and  peppers. The man says table number 1.   The sosegis  are siserling in pan.

2 thoughts on “Jaylen – The Market in Africa

  1. Fantastic 5SC, Jaylen. I wonder where in Africa you were? From where I live in Spain, we can see the north coast of Africa across the sea if the weather is clear! You’ve included loads of description in your writing this week. My favourite bit was about those sausages sizzling in the pan. It’s breakfast time now, so I think I might have to go and cook some up for myself. Well done, and keep up the creative writing!

    Miss Gill (Team 5SC)
    Costa del Sol, Spain

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