When the hot air balloon stop it kodint moov. The hot air balloon is colourful. I love hot air balloons because  it’s good. Hot air is made from fire. The hot air gos up and up in to the sky.

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  1. Hi Ahmad,
    You have written 5 wonderful sentences
    *I like the description you have used to describe the hot air balloons
    *I like that you have given your opinion about the hot air balloon
    🙂 I see you are using your phonics to spell your words, but maybe check over the word ‘couldn’t’

    Well done, and keep blogging

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