The hot air balloon is big and floats in the sky

The hot air balloon is yellow

The man fly’s the hot air balloon sat in a basket

The fire keeps the balloon up high

The hot air balloon is flying

2 thoughts on “5sc Ethan

  1. Great description of the hot air balloon.
    This could be improved by going into further detail, for example if there is anyone in the hot balloon and how they may be feeling.

    Like

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