I  lke a  hot air  baIIoon.  I lik the  colours.   The  hot air balloon are  flying  evrewer.  The  pepl r  in  the  baskit.   we  sor   fire in  the  balloon because  fire  maks it   fly.

2 thoughts on “5sc jaden

  1. You have written 5 great sentences, Jaden. You spelled colours, which is a tricky word, correctly and use because to join ideas together. Well done!
    Mrs Ower (Team 5SC)
    Costa del Sol, Spain


  2. Hi Jayden,
    This is a good imaginitive piece of writing. This could be improved if you used your phonics to help you spell some words.
    Keep up the good work and keep blogging.
    Well done!


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