The  dog was following the man. There is a shed. The man is putting flor in the cart so he can have some at home. The man is putting the boy in the cart. The lady is planting carrots in the soil.

2 thoughts on “Ahmad 5c

  1. Hello Ahmad,
    well done for such super writing. You have remembered your capital letters and full stops. I wonder what kind of dog it was and if you can think of to describe the shed? These describing words will help create great pictures in the readers head.

    Good luck and keep up the fabulous writing,

    Mrs Duxbury (team 5sc)


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