It would be dark and scary.  There is a  scary  monster  eating a rabbit.  It is very cold in the tunnel. Grrrrrrr said the monster. I ran away

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  1. Hello Lucy,

    Your sentences are very interesting. You have tried to use different sentence beginnings, interesting words, and included the sound made by the monster. Well done. 🙂

    Ross Mannell (Team 5SC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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