The steam-trian is, puffing . The old trian was red yelow becuas it was pianted that way.   The  famlie were going on daycashon. The steam train was niosy and loud long. The ticket  man was going to sleep.

2 thoughts on “5SC Jaylen

  1. I didn’t notice the ticket man dropping off Jaylen! I will have to look too! Well done on lots of interesting words and using ‘because’!


  2. Hello Jaylen
    Well done for typing these five sentences all about the picture. You have described it really well and used wow words to tell us lots of details. I need to look again for the ticket man going to sleep! I wonder if you have ever been on a steam train ride?


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