The train is big because is niw .  The old train is full of dirt. The old train is a steam train. The birds are pecking the man. They are going to eat his food.

2 thoughts on “5SC Joshua

  1. You noticed a lot in that picture, Joshua. I didn’t see the birds at first and had to take another look. Well done for these five sentences, and for using ‘because’ to give a reason.
    Mrs Ower (Team 5SC)
    Costa del Sol, Spain

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  2. I didn’t see the birds Joshua! I’ll have another look now. You are adding some interesting details and you used ‘because’. Well done.

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