The trun is resty and dirty.A trun is going to cartiff.A man is baying a ticket.The ticket inspectors ar making everyone have tickets to go on truns.The red trun is really bright.

2 thoughts on “5SC Luc

  1. Hello Luc,
    You have noticed lots of interesting things happening in the picture :-).
    You have used some great describing words to tell us about the old train and the newer red train.
    Thank you
    MrsP Team 5SC


  2. ohh your fourth sentence is very good! Can you see it is longer than the others? It also adds some details so very well done Luc!


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