The family is travelling back to London. The train is rusty.the man is wating for the tikete.the lady is wating .the new train is fast.

2 thoughts on “Ahmad 5c

  1. Hello Ahmad,

    I can see you have been looking carefully at the picture. There were many things to see. My favourite sentence is your first because you told us more than the picture shows, “The family is travelling back to London.” Well done.
    I can see Mrs Thomas has already given you ideas to help your sentences. Wow words make your sentences even more interesting.

    Ross Mannell (Team 5SC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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  2. Ahmad, you wrote this independently and quickly but can you see where you forget the capital letters? I wonder if you can add more wow words next time?

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