One day  a   Burglar put 100 boms  in  my house   and   Trapped   Me  in  a trap. Suddenly  ….

Boom!  Faris  got out   of   The  trap.

One day   Some    Boms  came  from  the  sky.  Faris and his  dad   and  his  mum and  his baby brother  were panicking! Because they thought  the  Bom  was going  to  explode  me.

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  1. This sounds like two stories Faris… It is a bit scary to think of bombs in your house. I’m not surprised your family were frightened. Some of the words have capitals when they are not really needed. I wonder if you can spot which ones?

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