I can see  a  wite dog wich was walking to  the duck.The groom was looking good,A  man walking  under  the hut. There was good horse. There is a big church,

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  1. Well done Blake. I can see the dog walking over to the duck, do you think he will chase it? You have remembered the capital letters and full stops but I would like to see longer sentences next week. You could add adjectives or a connective to make your writing even better.

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