There  was  a  hors  and  crit.   The  dog  was  wocing   to  the   Pond.  In  the  field  there

Wur   Sheets  of    Grrs.   The  peel   wur   Wearing   old  cols. The wedding   was  a  wedding  in  the  vilg.

 

 

2 thoughts on “Ffion 5SC

  1. Hello Ffion,
    My goodness you have noticed lots of different things happening in this picture – I had to look very closely in the picture to find all of the things you mentioned!
    You have tried to start each sentence in a different way – this keeps your writing interesting – keep up the great work!
    Thank you ,
    MrsP Team 5SC

    PS Did you see the cat in the picture???

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  2. You have looked carefully at the picture Ffion and describe it well. You are using capitals and full stops well most of the time but there are a few words which don’t need capitals but have them. Can you see where they are?

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