in  the   pet   shop     ther   were  dogs   and   hamsters   and       gine    pigse. ther    were    lotse   of    animelse    and   paretse.      the     funest   wose    wene      the   pupy   gumpt    up     to    the    girl. i   wish  i    had    a     pete.  i would like to go to the pet shop and by a pete.

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  1. You have written 5 super sentences Aimee, all starting in different ways and interesting. However you have forgotten all the capital letters. Do you remember how to make capitals on the computer?

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