Ther are cats and dogs becose they need looking after.I see a parrot.I would hear dogs barcing.I Love parrots,dogs and cats.ther are cages Evrywer.

2 thoughts on “Georgiana 5SC

  1. Georgiana, you have written 5 sentences but not all the capital letters are in the correct places. Can you see what needs changing?
    I am pleased you used ‘because’ in a sentence and I like the way that told us what you would be able to hear if you were there.

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