I  would   like  to  go   that  shop.  If   I  was   at   that  shop  I   would   hear   dog’s   barking.I  can  see   a   bird   flying.I   like   cat’s    becase   they   are   soft.I   like   soft   animal’s   becase   I     have   soft    toys.

2 thoughts on “Imogen 5sc

  1. Well done Imogen. You have told me what you see, hear and feel in your sentences and I liked the way that you used because to. You have tried to use ‘s but you don’t need them in these sentences, where you are talking about more than one. Dogs and cats is fine.

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