Fireworks colour are red purple yellow and  turquoise.  a rockits go up  in the air and one went boom .we did sparklers too. oliver was scared when the rockit went boom. We shouted and cried.


2 thoughts on “Reha 5sc fireworks

  1. Hello Reha!

    I like how you have introduced a character to make your story more interesting.

    Remember to use capital letters after full stops.

    Greetings from London, England (University of Roehampton)


  2. Great comments on Fireworks Reha! I like hearing about how you played with sparklers. Next time we could try to use capital letters at the start of our sentences. You did create a nice picture for me to imagine. Fireworks scare me to sometimes. They are so loud !!!!


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