The smell of the flowers is relley nice.                                                                                                 There is one house and a water mill.                                                                                                There is a dog with the girl.  I  think they are a famliy    There is a lake wich some poeple can play in. The is door wich is open.

One thought on “5 sentence challenge – Hasson

  1. Hasson you have done very well. You wrote five sentences with some capital letters and full stops independently and I like the way you wrote about how the flowers smelled. We found the missing full stops together. There are a couple of spelling mistakes, which, really and people. Can you see what you need to do to correct them?


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