I kan see a ferris wheel that is spinning round and round. There is the train which is at the station. Theres a kid buying a chocolate icecreem. Theres lots of people at the seaside. Theres hawsis on top of the tonol.
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I kan see a ferris wheel that is spinning round and round. There is the train which is at the station. Theres a kid buying a chocolate icecreem. Theres lots of people at the seaside. Theres hawsis on top of the tonol.
Well done Reneem. 5 sentences and you have gone back and changed some of the spelling which makes it much easier to read.
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