Everything in this shop is made out of clay.

It is colourful and there are three owl pots full of flowers.

There are  two red vases on the shelves. One’s bigger than the other.

A window is opened and I can see a cat.

Its so cool and i want to be here and it is a warm day.


2 thoughts on “Isaac 5 sentence challenge

  1. Super Isaac. You finished quickly and went back and edited your work and changed parts to make them better. You have actually written 6 sentences but you could make two into a longer one by adding ‘but’ or ‘however’. Can you see which two? There is also a little i which should be an I. I really like the fact you have talked about how you would like to be there.


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