in    the    pottery    i      kan    see     little    tins    of      paint    and      things      made out of clay.

There are    lovely    flowers        and    a      cat    mad      uotf       clay .   There is    a     lovely   plate      and         a   green face   on    the     wall.

There is window  and      i      can  see a pretty    garden.   There is      a       buny     on      the      shelthu.


One thought on “Reneem 5 Sentence Challenge

  1. Some lovely sentences here Reneem. You have used capital letters and full stops after I reminded you and added some description on your own. You have tried to explain where things are in the picture too. When you say I, it is always a capital even if it isn’t at the beginning of a sentence.


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