There is a steam   boat  in  the  river. Some   flags  are up   high on a ship.  A big white beautiful lighthouse helps  the  boats    sail  .  Some  horses are  pulling  a  stand of  food and people  are   baying food.  Some  people  are   dancing in   the  street.

3 thoughts on “5 sc Josh

  1. Good work Josh! I’m impressed by the detail and observations you have made. you have also made good use of adjectives and verbs.


  2. Well done Josh. You have looked carefully at the picture and you have used some adjectives to help describe the scene.You have remembered full stops and capital letters and used a joining word.


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