I   kain   see    difrint     kind   of      footprints         in     The    snow.  A      snowman     has   bin   mad    by    A       boy    kild     Maxi.     The    trees         and            cars   have    snow        and      ice   on   them. There   are     people     carrying     presents.   Som    children        are          playing      in      the     snow .

26.11.17

2 thoughts on “5 sc Reneem

  1. Well done Reneem! I really like how you used descriptive language to set the scene in the picture. Maybe use more adjectives when describing the things you can see in the picture.

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  2. Hi Reneem this is a nice five sentence challenge. I like that you have put interesting detail. I like that you have started your sentences with different words. I like that you have used lots of long sentences. I like that you have used more interesting words.
    By Nivas

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