i theink   its  Winter   because    its snowing.

theres    a    robin   on    the   tree.

theres a  chrismas    tree    because    its     christmas.

theres   a blue    car   cuverd    with    snow.

som  chilgrn   ar   playing.

26.11.17

 

 

 

 

 

3 thoughts on “5 sc Rifga

  1. I love that you noticed it was winter because of the snow. Well done for spotting the robin in the tree- I didn’t see that! Try to remember capital letters next time. Very good blog, well done!

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  2. You tried to write this independently and have done really well. You are leaving spaces between words and used ‘because’ to join two sentences. Try to remember capital letters next time.

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  3. Chris here, I like your work because you think it is Christmas because it is snowing and in the real world its Christmas. I like that you found the robin bird it took a little time to find the bird. Next time can you fit a little about the dogs if you find any pictures with dogs again.

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